(ALLITERATION)
Cows milked: mitigated mooing in the meadows then
Weaving on the warp, some workaholic women
Harvest of hapless halibuts on hooks
Bookish book-worms buried in books
A palomino and a pony patter on the paving
Hucksters and hawkers hawking every housing.
Ravers out on the razzle raising a raucous razz-ma-tazz
Beavers busy building beaver-dams but about it quite blasé.
Doves cooing a divine chorus
Frogs frisking out of focus
Horoscopes are hocus pocus.
Tidal waves of tsunami treacherously tread
Sea-anemones scattered upon the sea-bed.
Geraniums genuflecting in jungle-like gardens
Hunters wary of wandering wild-life wardens.
All this when I ventured about videotaping
Nature's much nicer even with no landscaping
These are direly different scenes from different parts of the globe
Perhaps like a space probe's kaleidoscopic poetic probe
Hello S.zaynub this is a wonderful poem full of life and colour well done enjoyed reading
I can imagine you reading this. I think you would jazz it up :) I liked.....Ravers out on the razzle raising a raucous razz-ma-tazz brilliant use of words to make your poem sing :)
A great oral picture of Nature, life and glob. I admire your delicate style in poetry.
A dazzling concoction with beautifully times words composed with delicacy of a songbirds voice. You give nature her voice. Fantastic
Excellent narration of life's scenes, exploring the essence of existence!
wow! this is really wonderful, magic of alliteration, you executed excellently! 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
fantastic. I like reading your poems. Very good.