Come To Discover Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Come To Discover

Rating: 5.0


come, across the boundaries
break the wall of dreariness
discover something new life

come, engage thyself in the field
it's heart to implant here the flower
discover your immortal love

come, speak the truth as nature
don't imitate to be blind, be creative
discover thyself to be enlightened

come, do the righteous always
inscribe thyself on a knowledge
discover a precious poetry

© Mahtab Bangalee
Chattogram
16/11/2022

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Part 3…. then finally it flowers, which then matures into ears of rice. Then comes the day of harvesting. A big crowd gathers to watch the harvesting machine working, though it is the same machine as last year, last season. Such happiness we get nowhere.

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Part 2. Although I plant paddy in our fields two seasons every year, the enjoyment does not subside, when we till the field, organise the manure and seeds, plant and replant, apply manure, weed the field organise adequate water..

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As I am a farmer basically, I do fully endorse your views. We plant a tiny cutting of rose shoot, watch how it sprouts, develops leaves and after many days a but, and then the day comes when the bud blossoms spreading its fragrance, it's gay beauty for all to enjoy.

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Richard Wlodarski 18 November 2022

Mahtab, this poem can't help but INSPIRE and MOTIVATE! Such a grateful experience!

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Aufie Zophy 17 November 2022

There are so many gifts, like peace, beauty, poetry, the love in our hears, creativity, .. that are freely available but remain undiscovered, unopened presents. Wonderful poem.

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Yashim George 26 November 2022

A pulchritudinous w-rap. Thanks. Between Frost, you and I; truth and beauty are just as same.

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Anjandev Roy 19 November 2022

Excellent work.....thanks for sharing...

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Anjandev Roy 19 November 2022

..... discover thyself to be enlightened...

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 November 2022

Come and discover a precious poetry! I am touched by the great honesty in this brilliant poem.5 Stars TOP Score.

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4. This is a true dissection of life, As you sow, so you reap. You sow love and happiness, you will them in plenty. Very wise words. True poetry. Congratulations. Top score

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