Susheela Shiju


Come To Me - Poem by Susheela Shiju

Come to me
When the stars adorn the sky
To adorn my life

Come to me
During the moonlit night
To light up my life

Come to me
When the dew drops fall on flowers
To drop your love on me

Come to me
When the world sleeps
Let's be awake in love

Come to me
Like the Lily of the valley
Let your presence bring fragnance to my life

Come to me
Like the rose of Sharon
Let your love bloom in my deserted life

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life


Comments about Come To Me by Susheela Shiju

  • Unnikrishnan E S (1/29/2020 6:50:00 PM)

    The sensual images make the poem bloom pink (Report)Reply

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  • Muzahidul RezaMuzahidul Reza (12/21/2018 8:32:00 PM)

    Let your love bloom in my deserted life, ..... a wonderful love poem you have penned excellently, dear poetess, it has made an fantastic enchantment to tender mind saying love needs for very life to survive, thanks for sharing the poem with us here in PoemHunter (Report)Reply

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  • Sandra Feldman (12/10/2018 4:27:00 PM)

    GORGEOUS!
    Love poem.
    Like sweet perfume it surrounds and takes possession of the readers heart in a most captivating way.
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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (12/4/2018 10:09:00 PM)

    To ask a loved one in an environment that is beautiful and romantic adds some more love in the meeting as mood changes with the environment and nature changes according to the mood of the man. An attractive poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Geeta Radhakrishna MenonGeeta Radhakrishna Menon (12/3/2018 11:32:00 AM)

    Lovely poem Susheela!
    So simple, yet so touching! I enjoyed reading this poem.......10
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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (12/3/2018 10:07:00 AM)

    I am sure
    when such softness words spoken
    come to life
    I assure u he will come
    hopefully
    hoppingly
    and make you happy
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  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (12/2/2018 8:51:00 AM)

    A refined poetic imagination, Shusheela. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • Jaya J (12/1/2018 9:11:00 PM)

    Another beautiful poem (Report)Reply

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  • Dev AnandDev Anand (12/1/2018 1:44:00 PM)

    Come to me
    During the moonlit night
    To light up my life. dew drops and flowers and the stars of the night and the soft moon. very lovely and romantic words. thank u dear poetess.
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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (12/1/2018 1:40:00 AM)

    Come to me
    When the dew drops fall on flowers
    To drop your love on me.like the lily of the valley and the rose of sharon.... beautiful poem with alliterations. than k u. you pray come to me o Lord with a real love experience. tony
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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (11/30/2018 6:39:00 PM)

    Dear Susheela, such a lovely poem...10++++++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Dr. Love (11/30/2018 2:41:00 PM)

    Another excellent poem. Well presented. May the love of your life, come to you and shower the love upon you. May your deserted life change into a life of flowers and chirping birds around you. Good job again. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 30, 2018

Poem Edited: Friday, November 30, 2018


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