Chuck Audette

Rookie - 9 Points (Poetry Hell, Vermont)

Concrete Poem #3: A Final Concrete Poem - Poem by Chuck Audette

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hmm. I guess my 'ee cummings committing suicide' is also a concrete poem...


Comments about Concrete Poem #3: A Final Concrete Poem by Chuck Audette

  • (4/18/2007 1:54:00 AM)


    Chuck,
    Three enjoyed by me - - -
    (1) Souped - up was Okie - Dokie! :)
    (2) The genius was to cause the problem,
    and then sell the solution! :)
    (3) You seem to have the same old 'unproven',
    although concrete solution! :)

    B.V.A.
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  • (12/19/2006 9:44:00 PM)


    DEFINITELY, my kind of humor LOL
    Loved it!
    Lee
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  • (11/9/2006 11:23:00 AM)


    this is class! ! my god, im actually laughing. thought id forgotten how! (Report) Reply

  • (8/8/2006 7:08:00 PM)


    Very clever the way you've brought clever imagery to this piece.
    I really like this poem. God bless-Michael Jeffrey Gale.
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  • (6/30/2006 10:44:00 PM)


    and yet another one. (Report) Reply

  • (4/26/2006 11:47:00 AM)


    this one is too good for words. If only MY mind worked like yours...all would be good with the world :) (Report) Reply

  • (4/21/2006 12:37:00 PM)


    This is the HARD EVIDENCE we have been looking for...for years! Great word work. Barb (Report) Reply

  • (4/20/2006 7:41:00 AM)


    Framed and displayed this 'conceptual' piece could be a contender for the Turner Prize! : -) Justine. (Report) Reply

  • (4/19/2006 4:12:00 PM)


    Good example of concrete thinking

    Also, I like that it rhymes so much
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  • (4/19/2006 4:22:00 AM)


    Ah, so that's where he's hiding. This is fantastic Chuck - very clever and it made me laught out loud.
    Hugs
    Anna xxx
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  • (4/17/2006 4:01:00 PM)


    Clever and funny!

    Patricia
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  • (4/17/2006 10:28:00 AM)


    HAW HAW HAWWWWWWWW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Est : < > (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2006 3:48:00 PM)


    DENSE, VERY DENSE, DEEP, VERY, VERY DEEP! (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2006 1:39:00 PM)


    I think the first letter spoils it, if you don't know what the C meant...?
    Danny
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  • (4/14/2006 1:30:00 PM)


    This is great, dark, yet funny. a clever poem even with only 3 different words used.
    have you done many other of these poems I like them.

    Best wishes

    Vincent
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  • Ernestine Northover (4/14/2006 1:17:00 PM)


    Stone me! Charles, this is a rock hard poem with a solid foundation, every lines a winner! Love from a chuckling Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 14, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, December 28, 2009


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