Condition Of My Broken Heart Poem by Vikram G. Aarella

Condition Of My Broken Heart

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Can someone soothe my broken heart
its in a miserable condition,
fate has hit me hard
where it hurts the most,
When the flower of love was about to blossom
the branch itself has been broken,
whom I thought will be mine
was a delusion of my mind,
I cant blame anyone for my state
All I asked was some love,
but, got humiliation and seperation in return,
people did not want me to be loved
they hated me for what I am,
I slipped in the first step itself
Dont have the courage to continue
in my journey of life anymore.

CR VGA
27/7/07
Llynypia

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahtivah Lawton 17 August 2009

wow..this poem brought tears to my eyes..bcuz this is exactly wat im goin thru

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Omar Ibrahim 17 August 2009

i agree with milica.....nice poem keep writing..

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Milica Franchi De Luri 16 August 2009

Hello Vikram Life plays cruel jokes on us sometimes, but not to bring us down but to make us stronger. I like the way you have written the poem..........

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Shirley Woods 06 August 2009

Hi Vikram, I have felt like this too! So hard to move on but you can't let people enslave you by your feelings for them. Best wishes. Like your work.

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