Connection Poem by Elena Sandu

Connection

Rating: 4.7


-Who am I?
...A name?
...A piece of paper?
...The pigment of my skin?
.. Forms on my bones?
-Hmmm...
those may be only stamps...
Try again!
rewind: crfdjchdrchrfdsj
Who am I?
Celestial dust
the oceans nano part.
Tears. Smiles.
Peace. Joy. Sadness.
Try again!
Who am I?
Parents. Siblings.
School friends
neighbour friends
their parents their siblings
teachers coaches tutors
bosses colleagues
lovers, partners
wives husbands
children.
The children's friends
Their family
their family friends,
the friends of friends..
Image taste thought
motion...
-Stop!
Asking again:
WHO AM I?

- If not
lost thing,
than I'm
the memory
of many.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Cecile 24 August 2013

Connection is like an ode to acceptance. A deep emotion well expressed in this poem

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Ramesh Rai 22 August 2013

you are my friend a member of my PH family.i hope you will not ask me again, who am i.

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Heather Wilkins 19 August 2013

if not lost thing than I'm the memory of many. good thought.

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Patricia Grantham 19 August 2013

I really enjoyed this poem. it is very well written and expressed. It reminds me of a poem I have written called Reflections take a look when you have time. We all have to take a good look at ourselves sometimes. We are somebody and we are beautifully and wonderfully made. A unique creation you are Elena.

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Unwritten Soul 16 August 2013

Like a mirror we are playing many roles just when we face our characters to different people..and in this big connection the invisible string tied us all together from heart to hearts with love and care signals..._Soul

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Luz Hanaii 18 May 2019

{Who am I? Celestial dust the oceans nano part. Tears. Smiles. Peace. Joy. Sadness.... If not lost thing, than I'm the memory of many. } We are soo much it's hard to describe, yet you did a beautiful job at it. Much enjoyed! 🌵

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Sandra Feldman 17 September 2014

The most difficult thing in life. Finding Oneself! Excellent poem, has a great winding flow about it. Very original

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Danny Draper 15 September 2013

I agree with Dr Subhendu Kar. Some nice introspective thoughts and imgery.

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Hans Vr 01 September 2013

Hey, Elena, this is great work Superb reflection

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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 August 2013

.The pigment of my skin? .. Forms on my bones? ...................wonderful write by metaphors Who am I ' is when textured in matrix of different roles of relationship, i do admire the way you depict the text,10++++

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