Dance with wondrous rhythm of rain,
Nature's cooling, magical, blissful, healing balm,
Pouring, prancing, tapping with vibrant motion.
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I could listen to the rhythm of the rain endlessly. It soothes the soul and it has a healing balm. Top Marks! !
A well crafted tercet with compelling images. A very lovely poem.
Love the imagery and feelings written into this! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++
Never thought of the rhythm of rain..but it is so true, it's the rhythm of life and we should dance with it in Nature; s fest
I wonder if my hippie American friend still dances in the rain. Whenever it rains now, I'll think of your beautiful poem and fond memories of her. Rainy days won't be gloomy anymore. THX so much, Geeta!