Dard Comments

Kal jo choT khayee thee uska dard ab tak hai......Yes!

Dil ki chot bharne mein, Kaun Jane, Waqt kitna lagta hain. Lovely couplet, touching the hearts..

Powerful write in a couplet, accompanied by good illustration

Ek majboor par khuda hona. Phir hawa k liye hawa hona. Jab bhi dekho jabeen hai arq aalood. Kitna mushkil hai be wafa hona?

Ek chot me kitni dard Ek muskan me kitni roshni. so smile, it can hide the pain...*****

The pain of body by the fist will be cured But the pain of heart by avoiding won't be cured wounded love suffers long even afterlife

एक बेहतरीन शेर एक मैं छोटा सा ज़ज्बात रखना चाहता हूँ मेरे रोने का जिस में क़िस्सा है वो उम्र का बेहतरीन हिस्सा है बैठे मोहब्बत करने के लिए हज़ारों पर शायद उसमे से एक दर्द देने वाला हमारा हैं बहुत खूबसूरत पंक्तियाँ और उसमे छुपा दर्द 100+

Hum bhi paast aur sama bhi sakt Par jina to hai chahe saard yaa gaarm. Bahut khoob ma'am.

Loved reading this fine Urdu couplet. Painful memories don't easily go away. Sentiments expressed with feel 'uska dard ab tak hai.... chehra zard ab tak hai'. I think this Mat'ala' is fit to be developed into a lovely ghazal. Thanks.

nice snap Kal jo choT khayee thee uska dard ab tak hai, Beete lamhon ki chubhan chehra zard ab tak hai humarree chott kaa kissee par assar naheen was wondering why you never read me PPME not even my Mom's Smiles but thanks now for your maiden coming come and read more oftenly

Kal jo choT khayee thee uska dard ab tak hai, Beete lamhon ki chubhan chehra zard ab tak hai humarree chott kaa kissee par assar naheen was wondering why you never read me PPME not even my Mom's Smiles but thanks now for your maiden coming come and read more oftenly ma'aam yahee hai Aarzoooooooooooo humaree phir aana kabhe likna urdu mei heeeee sahee

Shayad meri khushi, chehre ke dard ko na padh saki, mujhe sukoon nazar aa raha hai chehre pe. Lekin dil ko choo gayi....10********