**dark Clouds Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

**dark Clouds

Rating: 3.0


From freedom
To security
Checked
searched
Interviewed
Many times

Paranoia
Who stopped me
This time
“White or red”
Or just soldiers

In drawn lines
Colors
And appearances
Matter

Language and religion
Race and ethnicity

Dark clouds hovering
On my horizon
27/4/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 28 April 2009

dark clouds will always encircle me be they of religion, racisim or dispartity but its for us to await for that bright sunshine and grab our opportunities. Perhaps the law of Nature 'Survival of the Fittest' comes into play here nice poem -10 anjali

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Sandra Fowler 29 April 2009

Your words paint a dark landscape. And the mood is sustained throughout this somber piece. Excellent write. Kind regards, Sandra

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Ejaz Khan 17 May 2009

The tough times are even tougher for the sensitive ones, but remember this too shall pass. The dark clouds aren't just hovering over the horisons before your very eyes, the darkness seems to be on march whereever you see. A beautiful poem, good luck! 10+++ Regards

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Fiona Davidson 07 May 2009

Well written piece Sadiqullah....10+++

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The position remains same and not slightly changed Blessed with less and things not orderly arranged, Earth may show visible cracks and still will bear, I may not have that courage, words more to hear...yess dear dark clouds rating 10

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Reshma Ramesh 05 May 2009

hope the dark clouds pass away soon........to expose the lovely blue sky......well penned sadiq

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Naidz Ladia 30 April 2009

dark clouds represented bad moments..

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