From freedom
To security
Checked
searched
Interviewed
Many times
Paranoia
Who stopped me
This time
“White or red”
Or just soldiers
In drawn lines
Colors
And appearances
Matter
Language and religion
Race and ethnicity
Dark clouds hovering
On my horizon
27/4/2009
Your words paint a dark landscape. And the mood is sustained throughout this somber piece. Excellent write. Kind regards, Sandra
The tough times are even tougher for the sensitive ones, but remember this too shall pass. The dark clouds aren't just hovering over the horisons before your very eyes, the darkness seems to be on march whereever you see. A beautiful poem, good luck! 10+++ Regards
The position remains same and not slightly changed Blessed with less and things not orderly arranged, Earth may show visible cracks and still will bear, I may not have that courage, words more to hear...yess dear dark clouds rating 10
hope the dark clouds pass away soon........to expose the lovely blue sky......well penned sadiq
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
dark clouds will always encircle me be they of religion, racisim or dispartity but its for us to await for that bright sunshine and grab our opportunities. Perhaps the law of Nature 'Survival of the Fittest' comes into play here nice poem -10 anjali