Dark Horse Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Dark Horse

Rating: 4.9

Run like the wind
Against the wintry clouds
Against the Iron Horse
That is faster than a bullet
Run like the wind
And feed the others yr dust
As you reach the summit
You curse those who want to destroy you
Finally, knowing yr strength
You look down and smile
It was all worth while

Saturday, March 5, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: horses
Based on a painting by Alex Colville
Susan Williams 06 March 2022

It can't help but be a great poem when it sends horses flying through my imagination! Very vivid picture you have painted here with your words!

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Kim Barney 05 March 2022

Great poem, LeeAnn. I could picture the horse running against the train, and love the way you finished with a rhyme. Five stars.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 March 2022

And feed the others yr dust.........true. Well done. Bravo

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 06 March 2022

Crafty poem, nicely written. Full ****

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Pallab Chaudhury 06 March 2022

beautifully crafted one....

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Rob Lamberton 09 February 2023

We may run against the night itself yet when we summit we appreciate even the difficulties and the strength we had to gain to defeat them. Powerful poem! !

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Anjandev Roy 26 October 2022

Outstanding piece......like it....thank u, dear poetess....

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Indira Renganathan 08 April 2022

Superb....actually a poet's strength is to write such succinct yet highly meaningful poems...very impressive is this poem yours

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 March 2022

Beautiful and powerful poetic expressions! ! ! I can see the dark horse soaring high. To my Poem List.

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Kevin Patrick 17 March 2022

A horse which cannot be tamed by man is truly free, this poem is true poetry of the highest calibre.

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