Dark Horse Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Dark Horse

Rating: 5.0


Run like the wind
Against the wintry clouds
Against the Iron Horse
That is faster than a bullet
Run like the wind
And feed the others yr dust
As you reach the summit
You curse those who want to destroy you
Finally, knowing yr strength
You look down and smile
It was all worth while

Saturday, March 5, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: horses
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Based on a painting by Alex Colville
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 05 March 2022

Great poem, LeeAnn. I could picture the horse running against the train, and love the way you finished with a rhyme. Five stars.

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Susan Williams 06 March 2022

It can't help but be a great poem when it sends horses flying through my imagination! Very vivid picture you have painted here with your words!

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 06 March 2022

Crafty poem, nicely written. Full ****

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Pallab Chaudhury 06 March 2022

beautifully crafted one....

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 07 March 2022

Determination and perseverance seem to accompany your horse's every footfall, LeeAnn. The triumphant ending is pure delight.

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Indira Renganathan 08 April 2022

Superb....actually a poet's strength is to write such succinct yet highly meaningful poems...very impressive is this poem yours

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 March 2022

Beautiful and powerful poetic expressions! ! ! I can see the dark horse soaring high. To my Poem List.

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Kevin Patrick 17 March 2022

A horse which cannot be tamed by man is truly free, this poem is true poetry of the highest calibre.

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 March 2022

Beautiful poem. Loved its phrasing and imagery

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Richard Wlodarski 09 March 2022

Against the wind on a stallion! Keep them coming, LeeAnn!

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