Dark Thoughts Poem by Valsa George

Dark Thoughts

Rating: 4.1


At times, our heart becomes
A labyrinth of dark thoughts
Letting no rays of hope in
Making our world seem a wilderness
Tangled with nettles and brambles
The road we travel may appear circuitous
Taking us nowhere, leaving us fatigued
Sometimes weariness sets in
Like molten lead into our brain
Sending out smoke and heat
Like an overheated pan
Even the drops of consoling words
Instantly evaporate with a hiss
Causing scalding and burning!

Sunday, December 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 06 December 2015

Since there is an equal and opposite reaction to every action as proved by science and every night is followed by a new and refreshing dawn, dark thoughts occupying one's mind at some time will have to make an exit for giving room to the joyful bright thoughts. There is no space for pessimism in a vibrant mind. Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 December 2015

Tangled with nettles and brambles! With the muse of the troubles of life. Nice work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 December 2015

A thoughtful poem, it happens with all of us. Even the drops of consoling words Instantly evaporate with a hiss Causing scalding and burning!

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Paul Brookes 06 December 2015

No comfort here sadness but that is how we feel sometimes especially at this time with such horror in the world the sun will come through though well I hope it does Loved this poem.

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Kelly Kurt 06 December 2015

Attitude has an impact on perception. Thanks, Valsa

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 August 2019

Sometimes weariness sets in/ Like molten lead into our brain/ Sending out smoke and heat/ Like an overheated pan / Even the drops of consoling words / Instantly evaporate with a hiss / Causing scalding and burning! /.....so touching and true. The real thoughts are well executed. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Hazel Durham 20 December 2016

Darkness can overcome us at times, when it controls us seeping into every crevice of our mind, making war with our emotions. We reach out to our dearest ones for support and help to overcome this shadow world! Brilliant, insightful write!

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Savita Tyagi 17 December 2015

Thoughtful and introspective. Warding off those dark thoughts is a tough as well as rewarding fight. All of us can relate to it.

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 December 2015

Life does not always flow smooth. Nice write.

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Pollution need to be controlled in India, Superb mam

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