At times, our heart becomes
A labyrinth of dark thoughts
Letting no rays of hope in
Making our world seem a wilderness
Tangled with nettles and brambles
The road we travel may appear circuitous
Taking us nowhere, leaving us fatigued
Sometimes weariness sets in
Like molten lead into our brain
Sending out smoke and heat
Like an overheated pan
Even the drops of consoling words
Instantly evaporate with a hiss
Causing scalding and burning!
Tangled with nettles and brambles! With the muse of the troubles of life. Nice work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A thoughtful poem, it happens with all of us. Even the drops of consoling words Instantly evaporate with a hiss Causing scalding and burning!
No comfort here sadness but that is how we feel sometimes especially at this time with such horror in the world the sun will come through though well I hope it does Loved this poem.
Sometimes weariness sets in/ Like molten lead into our brain/ Sending out smoke and heat/ Like an overheated pan / Even the drops of consoling words / Instantly evaporate with a hiss / Causing scalding and burning! /.....so touching and true. The real thoughts are well executed. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
Darkness can overcome us at times, when it controls us seeping into every crevice of our mind, making war with our emotions. We reach out to our dearest ones for support and help to overcome this shadow world! Brilliant, insightful write!
Thoughtful and introspective. Warding off those dark thoughts is a tough as well as rewarding fight. All of us can relate to it.
Pollution need to be controlled in India, Superb mam
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Since there is an equal and opposite reaction to every action as proved by science and every night is followed by a new and refreshing dawn, dark thoughts occupying one's mind at some time will have to make an exit for giving room to the joyful bright thoughts. There is no space for pessimism in a vibrant mind. Thanks.