darkness enveloped
my whole existence.

I felt,
being in a better position,
and satisfied that nobody
peeps into my perfect world of misery.

It as i, myself,
would have been ignorant
of the fissures drawn within me.
Monday, March 24, 2008
Seema Chowdhury 13 November 2009
wali this poem is full of pain and hurt that is oozing out of every word you have used. may God Almighty take away and sooths your pain and give you peace of mind and soul. Ameen take care and pray, for prayers is a wonderful weapon.
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Ejaz Khan 06 November 2009
A beautiful write so close and yet so far, not easy to comprehend regardless of how far from truth one is, to see it a light is needed!
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Sebastine Humaemo 14 January 2009
waa deeply touched.....short lines with hidden myths..........sebastine
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Sarah Sisson 14 January 2009
I feel that way sometimes....great write!
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Julian Salvacion 09 November 2008
simple and yet it conveys an intricate emotion. loved it!
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Aijaz Asif 19 September 2008
darkness is my sweet friend...an excellent poem showing the deep thoughts and inner feelings...thanks
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Reshma Ramesh 19 September 2008
short and neat.......loved it
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Manonton Dalan 28 August 2008
in darkness i bestow my sadness and in the light i hide my loneliness. awesome poem. thank you very much
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Omar Ali Sabar 14 August 2008
darkness can overhaul any glimour of light... nice poem
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Chitra - 13 August 2008
talks about that one dark corner in the inner cloister but hy remember that the rest of the inner abode is rich in hope which will help you cope
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