Shahzia Batool

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Dawn! - Poem by Shahzia Batool

Memories dawn on me
at the nightfall, have you seen
where's gone the darkness?

Comments about Dawn! by Shahzia Batool

  • Saadat Tahir (8/5/2013 2:49:00 AM)

    Ah....the after glow of lost loved ones
    beautifully depicted....
    a bit ironic and dark in its effect....nicely penned well conceived with great compression

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  • Yasmin Khan (8/3/2013 5:21:00 AM)

    The darkness is lightened by memories' glow, I enjoyed this write brief but beautiful write (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (8/3/2013 5:20:00 AM)

    The night soon evaporates into a new dawn where all we have left are our memories. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (8/2/2013 4:27:00 PM)

    dawn is just around the corner. darkness will only last a short while. good write Shahzia (Report) Reply

  • (8/2/2013 3:51:00 PM)

    Interesting dream of yours. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (8/2/2013 9:22:00 AM)

    Very cute and deep.You can do it easily. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/2/2013 8:26:00 AM)

    Dawn of memories drive away the darkness of thoughtless state. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • (8/2/2013 6:24:00 AM)

    there can not be a better poem than this composed in a few words and thought-provoking-a-volume, thanx (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (8/1/2013 10:28:00 AM)

    dawn comes to dispel the darkness. memories are like mirror.beautiful write (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/1/2013 8:11:00 AM)

    Wow beautiful poem..Short and sweet and loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (8/1/2013 2:58:00 AM)

    sweet memories dispel the darness to a world where there is only happiness... love this poem, too... aw (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 1, 2013

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