Tuesday, June 2, 2020

Dawn At Dusk Comments

Rating: 4.7

On the horizon the sun settled
As if to give them a minute to think
Like the way they say your life gives you a moment
To look back
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 July 2020

A wonderful piece of work! Many congratulations for this magnificent poem being featured as Poem of the Day.

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Khairul Ahsan 24 July 2020

'To look back To rejoice or lament Before death takes over This was dawn No it was dusk Depending on where you stood' - An well presented dilemma. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

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Nice one.. good way of putting it.. clear 10 No going back Saturday,25th July 2020 nights are meant to recoup take a meal with night soup you shall have an idea to stage a coup that shall make you a powerful group Jadia Hasmukh

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 July 2020

A well penned poem of the day. Simply splendid. Congrats on your featured poece.....10+++

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 July 2020

This was dawn No it was dusk Depending on where you stood The sun of youth gone Real life finally rising.. thinking and philosophizing about dawn or dusk. tony

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Rajnish Manga 24 July 2020

A philosophical piece of writing with a sublime message of positivity. Thanks for sharing.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 24 July 2020

Very nicely done. Congrats on the selection as member poem of the day!

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Ruta Mohapatra 24 July 2020

This was dawn No it was dusk Depending on where you stood...……...Perceptive! Congrats on poem of day!

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 July 2020

Muse of life! ! To think before acting! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 July 2020

Pretty photo added upon this truthful poem.. Congratulations. Most deserving as The Member Poem Of The Day. Really a finest poem about life and its revolving.

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 July 2020

The sun of youth gone Real life finally rising.........superb feelings and the note- " As we grow up and realize that life is different from what we always think... adulthood is real" ........yes, exactly on the ever changing juvenile body of the universe we are all living souls in the evolution tyre of nature....... beautiful poem penned.......congrats for being selected this poem as POD....from me 10++

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Aarzoo Mehek 24 July 2020

With age comes the realisation. Nice poem.

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Sandra Feldman 24 July 2020

A memorable and very insightful poem! Congratulations are due, and blessing too.

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This is very insightful and beautifully crafted and this exactly happens with aging....10+++ .

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