Karle Wilson Baker
United States
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Days

Rating: 3.3
Some days my thoughts are just cocoons- all cold, and dull and blind,
They hang from dripping branches in the grey woods of my mind;

And other days they drift and shine - such free and flying things!
I find the gold-dust in my hair, left by their brushing wings.
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Mahtab Bangalee 03 November 2019
Some days my thoughts are just cocoons- all cold, and dull and blind, They hang from dripping branches in the grey woods of my mind; // beautiful poetic expression
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Rajnish Manga 07 March 2018
Thoughts should always be like that- '....in the grey woods of.... mind.... I find the gold-dust in my hair, left by their brushing wings'. Exquisitely crafted poem. Thanks.
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Kevin Taylor 07 March 2018
Simple, very often best.
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Practicing Poetess 07 March 2018
A short poem with a pretty ending!
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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 07 March 2018
What better way to express the way thoughts behave? Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing the lovely poem.x
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Damion Hamilton 07 March 2018
excellent vibrant, short little poem
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Edward Kofi Louis 07 March 2018
Days! ! With the muse of the mind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Glen Kappy 07 March 2018
Cool poem! My first time reading it. Baker uses what could be trite subject matter to make something fresh. Dripping branches in the grey woods of my mind—cool! -GK
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Simply fantastic and so brilliantly crafted............thanks for sharing
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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 March 2018
Such a brilliant write by Karle Wilson Baker??????
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