tanvi damle

De$! Re$ Of The He@rt

Do you remember,
how it was when we were still together?
How we used to in the rain dance,
and dream of going to England and France?
How we wrote our names across the sky,
how we drank, just to get high?
How no dream was out of reach,
how we strolled hand in hand along the beach?
How you always turned up late,
and still managed to make it the best date?
How we used to on top of our voices sing,
how you were the wind beneath my wings?
How we used to count the stars together at night,
how everything felt different but just about right?
How we never ran outta things to say to each other,
how we always promised to be together?
How we called each other names but never felt bad,
words can never describe what we had.
I still think of what it would be,
if I had you and you had me.
You made my every dream come true,
when i close my eyes, i still see you.
Even though now we're miles apart,
you're the one who still has my heart.

Poem Submitted: Monday, January 18, 2010
Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 19, 2010

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  • Aman Sa (3/21/2012 9:15:00 AM)

    Beautiful love song, it sounds music in just its lyrics. But a request, which i got as advice from my friends, try to use complete words, right from the title. It will give the reader a better start in his mind.

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  • Dr. Ratan BhattacharjeeDr. Ratan Bhattacharjee (1/24/2010 3:49:00 AM)

    Conjunction of rhythm, emotion and diction.... Ur poetic art is getting better and better in this kind of love poems. Dont write anything else. Only love poetry.....

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  • Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner (1/22/2010 11:06:00 PM)

    Emotion, words, everything is perfect in this wonderful poem. A heartful of thanks for writing this. God bless U..keep writing: -)

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  • Darlene Styles (1/22/2010 11:46:00 AM)

    i compleatly love it! !

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet SimonHoward The Motivational Poet Simon (1/21/2010 1:04:00 PM)

    Wonderful words that are loaded with love. Well done my friend! 10/10

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  • Joseph Poewhit (1/21/2010 4:40:00 AM)

    Nothing like that warm spot in the heart.

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  • Rajaram RamachandranRajaram Ramachandran (1/19/2010 7:57:00 PM)

    A poem that speaks out the inner feelings from the bottom of the heart.

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  • Ivor Hogg (1/19/2010 7:12:00 PM)

    A young girls dreams exposed to other eyes presented in poetic prose

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  • Tom Golding (1/19/2010 11:57:00 AM)

    Thank you for sharing a young girls dream

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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALEPERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (1/19/2010 1:03:00 AM)

    good read, heartfelt love poem, thanks for sharing

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (1/19/2010 1:01:00 AM)

    Desire is the food for the heart.You got it right Tanvi.

    Brett

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  • Aira Olayvar (1/18/2010 11:14:00 PM)

    “Even though now we're miles apart,
    you're the one who still has my heart.”

    Words of the heart of her who is so in-love… this is the way it is… nice! Well said dear…

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  • Sumita Datta (1/18/2010 10:59:00 PM)

    Very nice poem Tanvi... well narrated with good rhythm... :)

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (1/18/2010 10:19:00 PM)

    a sweet poem..............

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  • Luke Easter (1/18/2010 9:21:00 PM)

    Desire of the heart or love gone astray? How many times is the desire or heart mentioned in the body of your work? Maybe another title?

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  • Nikunj Sharma (1/18/2010 9:10:00 PM)

    This is a poem full of reality, romance, feelings, attachment, magnetism and portrays the contents very well.the flow is smooth and the rhythm is musical...good one

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  • Nikunj Sharma (1/18/2010 9:09:00 PM)

    This is a poem full of reality, romance, feelings, attachment, magnetism and portrays the contents very well.the flow is smooth and the rhythm is musical...good one

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  • Nikunj Sharma (1/18/2010 9:09:00 PM)

    This is a poem full of reality, romance, feelings, attachment, magnetism and portrays the contents very well.the flow is smooth and the rhythm is musical...good one

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  • Merna Ibrahim (1/18/2010 5:03:00 PM)

    Oh! so romantic..I see good memories here...Good Work :)
    Merna

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  • David Mountain (1/18/2010 12:56:00 PM)

    Very nice Tanvi, well done.

    David

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