Dead Fate Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Dead Fate

Rating: 5.0


Laughs
Dark fate
In life's wheel
Like a hell ghost
All efforts are lame
Present walking
To hide tears
Forehead's
Pains
Cries
Light years
Wets life's aim
The bloody paths
On success's journey
Enlightened blind
Crawling back
Planned fate
Dead


-12.12.2020 Chattogram

Saturday, December 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life,world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 13 December 2020

Eerie atmosphere here, dear poet but a loveliest poem created, brevity done. I enjoyed very much your excellent poem although I am afraidd of the Title DEAD FATE. As I just told you, I have enjoyed enormously your poem full of brilliance.5 Stars Full Thank you so much for sharing.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 13 December 2020

Only poets can laugh on planned fate and Enlightened blindness. Good poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 December 2020

A wonderful write! Liked it......5 🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟

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Varsha M 13 December 2020

White are pages of life Until we ink it dark I'm the author I choose To frame My Life. Maybe at this very time Hour doesn't seem In my favor, doesn't Mean I'm dead Forever. Time is very dicey guy Impossible to chain In our little brain For its always The free bird. Never loose hope there is always ways to find new hope.

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