Death Comments

A great poem! I felt that I was reading one of Shakespeare's write! 10+ -Raj

‘You bring all the freshness in life, Better half, you are my real wife….’ Hello Sir I’ll tell to Ms Sharma. LOL! Death is enigmatic. Excellent postulation. Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK Invite you to read and comment: LINGERIE- IG [new post.] Enigmatic Navel or other poems niv

If people thought of death in this manner they would not be fearful of it. Lovely thoughts. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

birth is the first step towards death. we are reborn everday. sleep is like death. Sir, you have so brilliantly brought across the idea of nothing dies, it just changes form. Mamta

nice way of putting it, Death is your wife... like the way you moved past the point of death, to give a fait look into the new begining after death. very nicely done 10+ Howard

sharing of your culture and it's perception so like my belief....though some roads may be different they all intersect...there should be no fear of death but the promise of new life.....and should one day one reach his or her Nirvana, , , , even life has it's beauty and serenity...

descriptive title scares no one..coz death comes anytime..whether we are prepared or not, it comes, so this piece is nice and while still alive, enjoy it..

Life and death aren't two seperate entitities and yet why yearn for it while being alive, there is certainly a reason for us to be on this side of the existence. A strong theme, well written. Scared? No sir, not at all, the only thing that can scare one to death is the prospect of coming back to this insane world once again. :)

C.P. you describe well a life renewed, our life energy, our consciousness never dies it just continues on and on. We should not fear death and like you I don't, I just look forward to rejuvenation once again. Excellernt write. Bob 10/10

a welcome song to death...in a very positive way...illusions are taken away in a wink...how true...great attitude sir

well....at first sight it seems to me...u have laid too much stress on rhyming...i somehow feel the flow has been confined to a period to bring out rhyming.....but again...this is what i feel.....nice try though! !

good write....well presented theme...

A Faithful Lover He alone struts with swagger fine, To tame alike, humans and kine. He breathes with us, with us he dines, The cupbearer of life’s wine. He feeds us all - the beings of clay, As people raise chickens for prey. We play in his gape, love in his lap, Unaware of bewitching trap. He relishes our cries and sighs While lurking in passionless skies. He is the solid truth here His shadows are kin and peers. He is death, our faithful lover Who leads us to peace hued bower................. A Good Write...........Sharmaji.................

nice poem, well done

It is scary and comical in way that it looks as if death is laughing at us saying it is futile and as if you th poet has learnt to accept death.

Dear Sir, You have penned very beautifully rhyming quite suitably and the air is very optimistic. Very nice poem.

this inevitable thing 'Death' is brought down so nicly.. u came up with the idea that life n death r like wheels of the same vehichle... lovely...

This is a subject that we who are getting older find interesting. I love the way your rhyming couplets dance along, enhancing the joy you feel, and your hopes for your next life. Irene

This is great, so many fear Death and only see a dark ending. Your poem is confident of a new beginning. A view I share, full of light....10

i love this poem.......... beautiful and unique............ thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***