Deep Feeling Poem by Molay Toufik

the last part is awesome!

I could everything? Great other than tht as far as i can see ^^.

Heart speaks here! A real-poem! ! I love the flow! ! top marks! !

It's great, I like the rhymings. Put more effort the sky is your limit. You can read & comment on my poems also by clicking on my name. Thanks

I enjoyed the rhythm to this poem. Since no one lives without soul That's why I'll call anytime by phone Trying not to be alone Nice work.

You're a very good poet. This poem is pretty good. Keep up the good work.

english may not be your first language; but man you're GOOD! keep writing!

Wow, Toufik, this one is very good as well. Very nice, full of feeling. Wonderful!

I think if you improve on your English a little more, your poems will captivate the reader like you intend. Wonderful thoughts here. Well done!

Much better English than the previous one. The feeling I got from reading it, was that it could be a little bit longer. I really liked the theme, but it ends a little too abruptly. Otherwise, it runs very well. Just needs to have more development of the theme, or in simple language, make it a longer. Keep writing :)