Desperation - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Desperation - Tanka

Rating: 4.8

I am like a ship
Loaded with a freight of grief
The wind guided me
To a large stable anchor
But swept away by sea swells.

Copyright 2023, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 15 September 2023

Thanks for sharing this poem...

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 September 2023

Wonderful Tanka Bravo rose-Marie! ! ! !

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Kingsley Egbukole 16 September 2023

Beautiful poem captured in few words

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 September 2023

A heart touching ink. Loved it. Thanks friend.

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Anjandev Roy 15 September 2023

....swept away by sea swells...... excellent piec

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Indira Renganathan 05 October 2023

Desperation is such a kind of emotion to thrust us into nothing...nice metaphor there.. thoughtful write...liked

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Rebecca Navarre 24 September 2023

Beautifully and heartfully described! .. Ever such a heart touching reflection! .. Beyond #'S! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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It really adds to my pain and anchors in my heart

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 20 September 2023

A melancholy poem, which very aptly portrays desperation, through vivid imagery. Wonderfully crafted.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 20 September 2023

A sa

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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