Have i ever made such a smile
the spring manifested her colorful ductile
the flower never blossomed futile
to make her fragrance every one juvenile
Have i ever made such a smile
stars twinkled devitalise
moon gave up moonlit night
sun has frozen during day light
Everything is distorted if we look close enough. A great write.
You capture the reader with beautiful lines so vividly expressed! Superb write!
A delightful poem. If we could only smile more at people the world would be a happier place.
Ah! you are on the top of a mountain, plus 1800 meters hight, looking for the stars and blossomed flowers at your feet. Now i understand! ! ! A big smile in my face! ! ! !
Wow. Wonderful poem. Have I ever made such a smile., , lovely write and loved reading it too.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice images and distortions. Thank you.