Don't Brush Your Shoulders ~ Poem by Juhaina Tumlu

Don't Brush Your Shoulders ~

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Come on you are too naïve
You must understand the difference
between a thinking mind and a rotten mind
if you want to play this game of life.
Come on, look at your body and mind.
You are challenging a poet, don't you know.
He will put you in your place with the stroke of his pen.
He is calm, and you are bragging.
Sun is out, but you're facing darkness.

Wednesday, May 3, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: poet,satire of social classes
M. Asim Nehal 03 May 2023

Yeah, if you do you will pay the price. Nice poem Juhaina.

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Rajan T Renganathan 04 May 2023

They have power of pen. Very true.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 May 2023

I am in total agreement with Bharati Indeed

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Anjandev Roy 29 May 2023

This is a superb piece.....thanks a lot.....

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Bharati Nayak 05 May 2023

Very true.

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Unmindful rivalry between poets is thing of past and we should stay away from. Do such poems have place in POETRY?

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S H 04 May 2023

Class poem.

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