Don't Leave Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Don't Leave

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You came to my house and said
You are mine forever, but I paid
The precious moments with your
Blue smiles, where played impure

Valentine came on the hazy moon
Where dark owl mocked sole alone
Azure sun raised face in violate sky
Where blood petals spread yell sigh

Now the blue icicles imbue the tears
On the gypsy roads the spring bears
The grief of transience for peony root
Where love forever was a villain truth

Yet together living is the stage of peace
Don't leave; don't leave me alone, please

© Mahtab Bangalee
Chattogram
13/02/23

Thursday, February 16, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: grief,valentine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
D.N. Rebb 16 February 2023

Powerful! The last two lines are just amazing

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Good poem, Dear Poet. Keep it up

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Nosheen Irfan 17 February 2023

Heart touching love poem. Parting is painful. Lovers must stay together. Nicely penned.

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Sandra Feldman 17 February 2023

Excellent work, far reaching and beautifully written.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 February 2023

Wonderful Mahtab Just Wonderful!

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me poet yeps poet 17 February 2023

great pal

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