Don't Tease Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Don't Tease

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Wait, I won't open the door of the sky
It's heaven of peace
The ground you are living is firing
It's burning fire pitch

War, the war makes you hero
Both of dead and alive soldiers,
Gives nothing the war except destroying
The peace of living gone too far

Draw the democratic field feeding the corpse
Don't tease the sky by your mind of curse


© Mahtab Bangalee
26 January,2022
Chattogram

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 26 January 2022

This is a great poem! Well done...bravo!

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Moore Noore 08 February 2022

Draw the democratic field feeding the corpse Don't tease the sky by your mind of curse /// superb poem shared regarding war and human peaceful thought. I appreciate your brilliance about the theme of this poem.

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Sultan Deen 07 February 2022

Superb and realistic poem penned by you. Human war can also demolish the divine power. So, if we need the paradise then have to leave all ideology of wars. great thought provoker you are Mr. Bangalee

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Nabakishore Dash 28 January 2022

Excellent piece dear poet.

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David Wood 27 January 2022

There is nothing good about war.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 26 January 2022

It is a nice message very well penned

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