Dream Poem by hopeless 111

Dream

Rating: 4.9


close your eyes
you have to dream
you can see whatever you need
you have to make a real dream

everything is possible and you got to believe
all things is ready but you have to be aware and free
let`s start and see
it`s my turn now to make it a full lovely Dream
but
i have alot of DREAMS how could i put in one dream
only one big Dream
think deeply my mind
it`s time to release all fears and be free
A different view of life i need to see
just think and dream

may i see my man is here
bright eyes with a lovely smile
looking at me

he may give me a nice dream
he may give me a piece of meat

should i eat or only keep?
is it real? i need to see
looking and looking

alot of noise, opening her eye
oh my goish, it just DREAM

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 03 December 2008

Very interesting poem as it seemingly describes poetess attempt to a Livid dream. It reminds me of scientific paper on dreams in which it is described how we can dream knowing that we are dreaming. This is a Livid dream. It is possible and needs to be practiced. Beautiful feeling!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 December 2008

Dream is like your body..... in you.........but your mind still in your bedroom.Think about it Angel!

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Yasser Koor 02 December 2008

i is amazing i gave u 10+++++++ it it deserve more

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Roseann Shawiak 01 April 2015

Dreams are a fantastic way to figure out what you want in life, sometimes our dreams do become a reality. That has happened to me. Really great poem, very vivid and amazing! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 29 November 2009

Too good the way you dream..: -)

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 11 April 2009

if you dream long enough it would be a reality................Good Write.......

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Hazem Al Jaber 04 December 2008

the most pretty thing we get in our life is, , dream.. dream about whom we love.. yes it is.. even we won`t to wake up again to live that dream for a long long time so pretty stunning piece.. i like it soo thx for sharing dear sweet girl.. yours hazem

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Reshma Ramesh 03 December 2008

dreaming dreams..........lovely poem

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