Dream Poem by Kranthi Pothineni


Rating: 5.0

This wild thunder scream
Flowing flood of stream
And angry sun rays beam
Tells nature played has team

It plotted dangerous theme
That had a deadly scheme
Of showing its dark extreme
And its power of supreme

Tells it destroys any regime
With in seconds like gleam
Which will cry to redeem
But heart said without steam

Lets sing songs of new dream...

Rajaram Ramachandran 10 October 2009

The poem is well rhyming and sings like lullaby.

0 0 Reply
Eyan Desir 10 October 2009

Good rhymes... Well written 10s..... This made me smile thanks

0 0 Reply
Surya . 10 October 2009

aonderful poem on floods? really expressive with rhyme voted10 happy diwali surya

0 0 Reply
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 10 October 2009

lovely rhyme..almost a song..lovely to read, , ,10

0 0 Reply
Catrina Heart 11 October 2009

wonderful poem shared..fabulous rhymes!

0 0 Reply
Shanta Majumder 24 October 2009

Lets sing songs of new dream... ....Very positive....liked your poem...

0 0 Reply
Louis Rams 16 October 2009

like the old saying goes 'you can't fool mother nature' your first verse said it all. beautifully written. a ten

0 0 Reply
Shashendra Amalshan 15 October 2009

Hey I loved your word play here....Make me wana sing the poem Very nice to read indeed.. Good message too.. 10 regards shan

0 0 Reply
Anju Addanki 14 October 2009

A wonderful rhythmic, musical, poem

0 0 Reply
Dr Hitesh Sheth 13 October 2009

A good poem on rhyme........a good write...........

0 0 Reply
Error Success