Dreams Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Dreams

Rating: 5.0


Sun shines on a long winter's night
Along with a full moon on its side
And scintillating stars dressed sky
Oh, day and night hugged in my eyes

Heavy snow falls on hot summer days
My apple tree blooms in cold winter
Along with its colorful autumn leafs
Oh, sun showers and shivers in my eyes

Deserts are looking green and blue
Rivers are always singing and dancing
Far away lands came close to give rose
Oh, dead ones are breathing in my eyes

Alas, I lost myself in my dreamy eyes
Where heart is painting its dreamy paint
And there my souls wishes smiles bright
Oh, what a lovely gift he gave to mankind...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 February 2010

magnificent and brilliant, i can see

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Rajaram Ramachandran 10 February 2010

The poem describes some kind of strange unsual scenes in the wild dreams. Must be a magical world in which such things may happen.

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Joseph Poewhit 10 February 2010

Words have a very nice flow to them.

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Louis Rams 10 February 2010

souls wishes smile bright that line says it all.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 February 2010

Beautiful contrast, Kranthi, but in dreams only. Wish it could happen in real life too. Keep dreaming. Your dreams may realize one day. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 March 2010

‘…Oh, dead ones are breathing in my eyes…’ It’s better to be an absurd dreamer than a pseudo-intellectual with parched heart…filled with dry postulations… Very good write and gallery of dreamy-imaginative colorful-canvas… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Kesav Easwaran 21 February 2010

well said...yes; dreams are god given gifts

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Antonio Liao 17 February 2010

Great nostalgia of life...cream of the dream of life after death. and life before death.... beautiful...thank you and God bless... a 10 +++

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The Lost.. 16 February 2010

i think that the best moments in our life is the dreaming moments.. nice poem to read, and thanks for sharing.

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Sheldon Saluta 11 February 2010

i like it! the image and symbols are like storming into one! i like it! keep the pen writing!

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