Drift Away Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

How sad is sad. This heartfelt poem, Reflects so well, The deep love,

The deep love, Many had wished they had, had. So sad but so well written and felt, reaches the heart.

The great depth of sadness is so very well conveyed in your poem, Jayne. The progression from smilinglaughinggrieving is so heartfelt and very stirring to the reader.

BRAVO! ! ! ! ! ! ! jAYNE

Thanks all for your kind comments. Much appreciated x

Lovely, lovely poem, so tender....I loved it.

A very touching write. Full of love and sadness it flows beautifully. Nice share.