I put my head
In these hands
of despair as I see
The drugs and the cheats
What kind of man
Wants to see that
on the streets
They take over the town
Selling their brown
Whats it going to take
For someone to bring them down
Maybe it's time
They took their own brown
Then lets see
If they can stand their ground
One way or another
They are leaving this town
Great write! and a great poem..... the drugs and cheats are everywhere in this world, spreading their poison like a communicable disease to people, , Eradicate these worms of satan from this world, , But who'll listen, their veins are already in vain, and, Digging theirs grave by themselves. ******************************
Sometimes i feel bad for them, because they just got cheated by the pills...They just want to see blue instead of red, want fly a hope but not run on stones...The pills cheating, for illusion it brings, control mind, addicting and shrinking everything...We need to let them breaking the scene in the air they breathe to the reality it seems..why... i am afraid the pills tell lie, 'attack that criminal for having me' while the criminal is refer to you...the pills are cheating by illusion of creating.._Unwritten Soul
People get addicted, I think, to escape reality. The drug pushers abuse that weakness. As long as there are addicts, there'll be sellers. What is 'brown'? It's even more sad, when you have someone in the family who's an addict. Great poem as always... :)
This poem is so true. People shouldn't make money that way it's called being lazy. They should get real jobs!
Poem with a Great message.. Loved the way you portrayed it.
Great read! ! Thanks for the suggestion! ! I'll be reading more of your poems! ! Keep up the great work!
I hate to say this but I highly doubt people are gonna take that big of a stand against drug dealers.
Again another poem taking into account another big evil prevailing in the social order that is drug trafficking. And the remedy lies in, 'Maybe it's time They took their own brown Then lets see If they can stand their ground One way or another They are leaving this town ' Great write.
Love this line here Dave! ! ! 'Whats it going to take For someone to bring them down' Great Peom!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the greatest scourge on earth... the drugs, and the world they possess!