Dusk, As The Carnal Scenes Burst Forth Poem by Captain Cur
Dusk, As The Carnal Scenes Burst Forth
Now comes the dusk, a prelude to this night
of vermilion skies and dream filled slumbering.
O tempestuous colors of delight
brazenly creating landscapes as these
the mountains and seas all encompassing;
descending in waves round this spinning earth,
dancing with nature in untoward glee,
wanton visions bare lustful gods in mirth
offering pleasure as the carnal scenes burst forth.
Spenserian Stanza. I have to look this up! Excellent write- -there is so much vitality of color and exciting words chosen here. It felt like I was submerging in a Van Gogh painting. Lush, Sensual, Lush. A whirlwind of scenery. Lush. 10++++++
Before night the dusk comes and motivates mind with calmness and perception of higher realm. Mountains and sea encompass and the beauty shines with joy. You have perceived wonderful vision. An excellent imagery is drawn in this nice poem...10
'wanton visions bare lustful gods in mirth offering pleasure as the carnal scenes burst forth' - what a unique expression depicting the carnal delight! Very well crafted poem, a delight to read and recite!
BLIMEY! ! ! very poetic. But i was hoping for illustrations (besides a ship or your crusty cap'n's face) . You know! ! ......: wenches in trench coats, or fresh OUT OF THEM! ! ! but, i'll still reserve a front row seat for your offerings if it doesn't set me back more than 2 pieces of eight. to MyPoemList. bri :) [stowaway]
A wonderful poem that brings out the beauty of nature. Superb imagery. Beautifully crafted write so vividly conveyed.10+++++
God, give me some of captain's craftsmanship! If necessary, steal some of his own...
Beautiful, the magical touch of your hands is still there Captain Cur, love it!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Descending waves spin around Earth and amaze mind. Revisiting this lovely poem we feel glad...10