Dusk, As The Carnal Scenes Burst Forth Poem by Captain Cur

Dusk, As The Carnal Scenes Burst Forth

Rating: 4.8

Now comes the dusk, a prelude to this night
of vermilion skies and dream filled slumbering.
O tempestuous colors of delight
brazenly creating landscapes as these
the mountains and seas all encompassing;
descending in waves round this spinning earth,
dancing with nature in untoward glee,
wanton visions bare lustful gods in mirth
offering pleasure as the carnal scenes burst forth.

Sunday, September 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: colors,landscape ,skies
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2018

Before night the dusk comes and motivates mind with calmness and perception of higher realm. Mountains and sea encompass and the beauty shines with joy. You have perceived wonderful vision. An excellent imagery is drawn in this nice poem...10

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Susan Williams 02 October 2018

Spenserian Stanza. I have to look this up! Excellent write- -there is so much vitality of color and exciting words chosen here. It felt like I was submerging in a Van Gogh painting. Lush, Sensual, Lush. A whirlwind of scenery. Lush. 10++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2018

Descending waves spin around Earth and amaze mind. Revisiting this lovely poem we feel glad...10

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Khairul Ahsan 18 December 2018

'wanton visions bare lustful gods in mirth offering pleasure as the carnal scenes burst forth' - what a unique expression depicting the carnal delight! Very well crafted poem, a delight to read and recite!

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Bri Edwards 02 November 2018

BLIMEY! ! ! very poetic. But i was hoping for illustrations (besides a ship or your crusty cap'n's face) . You know! ! ......: wenches in trench coats, or fresh OUT OF THEM! ! ! but, i'll still reserve a front row seat for your offerings if it doesn't set me back more than 2 pieces of eight. to MyPoemList. bri :) [stowaway]

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 October 2018

A wonderful poem that brings out the beauty of nature. Superb imagery. Beautifully crafted write so vividly conveyed.10+++++

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Kostas Lagos 09 October 2018

God, give me some of captain's craftsmanship! If necessary, steal some of his own...

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Unwritten Soul 07 October 2018

Beautiful, the magical touch of your hands is still there Captain Cur, love it!

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