Per. Nig.


Dust - Poem by Per. Nig.

A cloud of dust rises in the air
The trees bend double by the gust

The empty space between planets
Contains measurable amounts of dust

When it’s rainy or dewy
Don’t stride with thrust

That’s my heart on the ground
In the color of the rust

(2008/10/12)


Comments about Dust by Per. Nig.

  • Randy Hogan (1/11/2009 4:01:00 PM)

    STONE BREAKS AT THE ENDS OF TIME. WITH A MIGHT BOOM
    TOGETHER I WILL BE WITH YOU AT LAST.....TO START ALL OVER AGAIN
    IN SANDS OF TIME AS SEED OF TEARDROPS OF LOVE IN YOUR EYES
    wow you are timeless... such beautiful poem..
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  • Dr Kamran Haider (10/26/2008 4:07:00 AM)

    What you have said in few lines is difficult to write in a whole book... I love your way with words...

    The empty space between planets
    Contains measurable amounts of dust

    Beautiful indeed...

    Regards, Kamran
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  • Elle B (10/24/2008 12:54:00 PM)

    Easy to understand and not to forget. Good piece of work (Report)Reply

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  • Triin Kann (10/22/2008 8:24:00 AM)

    Simple words, but yet such a magnificent poem. So beautiful is all I can say. (Report)Reply

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  • Leon & Sarah Harris (10/18/2008 5:27:00 PM)

    i.e.u so beautiful and fantistic word! (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (10/18/2008 9:36:00 AM)

    A v e r y beautiful poem.
    10 for it.
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  • Sarah AbdullahSarah Abdullah (10/15/2008 2:06:00 PM)

    Loved how you made the word(Dust) able to be related to million things and million feelings (Report)Reply

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  • Annie Girl (10/15/2008 10:38:00 AM)

    so organized thoughts nice (Report)Reply

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  • Ershad MazumderErshad Mazumder (10/15/2008 9:24:00 AM)

    I love your poem.Iran is the global HQ of poetry. (Report)Reply

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  • Cherry Zhai (10/14/2008 5:16:00 AM)

    Very thoughtful, reveal calmness of your heart. (Report)Reply

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  • Greenwolfe 1962 (10/13/2008 8:42:00 AM)

    The readers will have a hard time finding the connection between these lines.
    The rhymes abnd rhythm are fine and worthy. There must be a connection
    between them that the reader discerns immediately. Life is short. Do not
    force a reader to spend life time searching. You would not wish to either. Even
    minutes, is too long.

    GW62
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  • Lynda Robson (10/13/2008 7:31:00 AM)

    Ashes to ashes, dust to dust, another lovely write from you,
    10
    Lynda xx
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  • Marvin Brato (10/13/2008 4:20:00 AM)

    We were mold from the dust
    So we all go back to the dust

    Nice poem..10.
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  • Tsira Goge (10/13/2008 1:54:00 AM)

    Melodious and fine poems, Nightingale... Gallant... 10...
    Tsira
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  • Rani Turton (10/12/2008 2:14:00 PM)

    A poem that speaks about the atoms of love...even those contained in the dust. I liked it a lot. (Report)Reply

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  • Thad Wilk (10/12/2008 10:24:00 AM)

    Ahh carried on this breeze strong enough to bend trees 'is your love' - that she sees!
    Great read Shiraz! *10*
    Friend Thad
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  • Anjali Sinha (10/12/2008 8:36:00 AM)

    yeah nice
    and dont forget--
    thou art dust and unto dust
    thou shall return
    +++10 anjali
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  • Nathalie Petersson (10/12/2008 8:21:00 AM)

    so beautiful! I like that one

    Take Care!
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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (10/12/2008 7:49:00 AM)

    excellent! what an observation! ...........10++ (Report)Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/12/2008 5:39:00 AM)

    ' Thats my heart comes to feel you, in the color of rust, and from rust it turns to lust........captivating our arsenal of hold up! ' (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, December 5, 2008


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