Riding on wishes of dear ones,
Gliding through imaginations,
In company of P.H. fraternity,
I have touched the age of seventy.
Enjoying cruise in the life ocean,
Amassing veteran jewels as companions,
Taking life in it's stride cheerfully,
Let meaningful be this Expedition.
Copy wright @ Ratnakar Mandlik
Let meaningful be this Expedition........lovely representation.Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.
Expedition with PH poets has been wonderful experience over the years. You have expressed it well. Thank you.
Happy Belated Birthday, Ratnakar. I didn't know! It sounds as though your fellow poets on PH are among your favourite gifts and presents! : -)
Life is likened to an adventurous quest in your enjoyable poem. Its enthusiasm is catching.
I enjoyed the use of the word expedition- -we should live our daily lives with the attitude of an expedition into unexplored realms! ! ! Excellent!
You have been living the life with undying hope and in peace. You have an positive attitude towards living this life. You are blessed. 'Enjoying cruise in the life ocean, Amassing veteran jewels as companions, Taking life in it's stride cheerfully, Let meaningful be this Expedition.'... is so nice. Loved this. Thanks for sharing.
Part - 2 Thanks for sharing this gem with us. Full vote.
It is a brilliant poem based on metaphor on occasion of your birthday. The beginning lines are most touching that I like to cite here....Riding on wishes of dear ones, / Gliding through imaginations, / In company of P.H. fraternity, I have touched the age of seventy. So fantastic. May God bless you abundantly. May the next life after seventy be cheerful ever.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It will definitely be meaningful and cheerful......thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.