Eaglewise Poem by Juneil Sechico
Eaglewise
I'll soar above the storms of life,
Won't quit 'til I win over the fight;
Find strength through my mystic eyes,
Have feast in the heart of rainbow sky.
Won't let the thunder's roar rule over me;
I'll find the sun to kiss the bluest sea;
With blissful heart, I'll live in one day;
Timeless joy will keep me in tranquility.
I will bounce back higher if I fall,
Spread my wings and fly proudly tall;
Blazing heart will keep me propelling,
Burning desire will keep me dreaming.
Failure isn't meant to be my ending,
Nor weights can disable my humble wings;
Cargoes can't make me heavily laden,
But will fuel me to win the game.
I'll fly toward my starry dream,
Not for the kudos' sake of my name,
But because that is I meant to be,
To activate the true nature of me.
Dear Juneit, Thanks for a good rhythmical poem with a definite objective. When you write. 'I will fly for my starry dreams not for the kudos for my name' we know the detachment you are trying to reach. IN the Geeta, Hindu Religious book, Lord Krishna says to Arjuna, ' KARMANYE BADHIKARASTE MA PHALLESHU KADACHANA' meaning you have got a right to duties not to its results. This detachment is needed to attain the higher level. A 10 from my side for theme, vocabulary and rhythmic expression. Rajkumar
Very inspirational and imaginative poem Juneil....great rhyming
It was a very well written piece and I enjoyed it. Inspirational sort of.
Yes Juneil...what would it be like to soar with eagles... a splendid topic well done...Alf
Young man you have your talent shinning...your words were a bit strong animated having a nice end rhymes...THanks
I love your words and the way you express yourself it shows the type of person you are inside when you can show that you won't give up! 9/10 brilliant you have really taught me that words are the most dramatic and important part of a fantastic poem! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 12:05:56 AM # 1.0.0
i think your poem is beautiful