Earthbound Is Where We Want You!…. [ Fantasy, Sort Of; Inspired By Lora Colon's Poem ‘ Earthbound'; Short; Unhappiness] Poem by Bri Edwards

Earthbound Is Where We Want You!…. [ Fantasy, Sort Of; Inspired By Lora Colon's Poem ‘ Earthbound'; Short; Unhappiness]

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Earthbound is where we want you, surely,
{not to be confused with Shirley}, girly.
For surely your name on PoemHunter is Lora,
and here you blossom like beauteous flora.

I'm sorry I drank dry your "fountain of hope".
I'm such a cad, a clumsy clod, and ….big dope!
But I'm glad you say: "my spirit is resigned".
Lord knows you've been quite unfairly maligned**! !

(November ….5th …..2017)

**"maligned"=abused

Sunday, November 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i have a tendency to 'make fun of'? some of Lora's 'sad' poems about 'her' lack of love/lovers.she writes so well!i can get away with teasing her, but maybe you wouldn't!

bri:)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2017

Spirit resigns during such time of sadness and this provokes thought.

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Bharati Nayak 08 November 2017

You have written many poems in reply to Lora Colon; s poem.I have read some of her poems.She is a great poetess.

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Eugene Levich 06 November 2017

Lara Who? Details, pleasel

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Savita Tyagi 05 November 2017

Now I have to find Lora’s poem. I agree we do want her earth bound. She is a great writer and I do like her poetry.

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