Essence Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Essence

Rating: 5.0

When Jack said that he hated the world
But its essence, I felt his pain
Even more so, now
I felt when I am inside too
Watching the news, over and over
I get drilled just wanting to know the weather
When will we understand?
We are killing human kindness as well the earth
When did progress took over
We poisoned the lakes
And we farmed to extiction
As we all took away the land without permission
We fed the indigenous Christianity and firewater
Until they became sick and weak
And now, I cry with guilt as I curl into my bed
With my old dog,
Hoping we realise our mistakes
Before the essence is gone

Wednesday, October 4, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: world conflicts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 04 October 2023

A wonderful poem. Well penned dear poetess LeeAnn.5 stars*****

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Kingsley Egbukole 04 October 2023

Human beings are part of the societal problems by our activities. Well captured

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Sandra Feldman 04 October 2023

Yes, we did all this. A tragedy, so well summarized, But is it too late now to correct it or stop it? A poem with great, good intentions.

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Indira Renganathan 07 October 2023

Indeed to be good for a good social cause is our duty...well crafted...liked

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Kingsley Egbukole 05 October 2023

With conflicts man destroys both nature and what he built. Nicely scripted

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Nabakishore Dash 05 October 2023

Hoping we realize-------essence is gone. A great warning in very excellent words to the humanity.Alas we never realize.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 October 2023

A very heartfelt write that many of us can relate thereto. Very touching.

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Richard Wlodarski 04 October 2023

A painfully GOOD poem, LeeAnn! Nice nod to Kerouac! We can only pray to God that we never lose sight of the essence.

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