~ Eve Niv ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Eve Niv ~

Rating: 4.4


Keep in
Bosoms’ sleeve
Your Eve Niv.

Eve Niv
Many looks -
Smart Street n’ Hip Hop
Cute n’ Tip Top
Vintage n’ Trendy
Blossoming BrunetteBlondie
Ethnic n’ Debonair
O’ Beaut connoisseur
Come-on to allure
Assure I’ll be your.

Says Eve Niv
Hush why?
Flush stale shy.

Will salve
Yours grieve
It’s Eve Niv.

Eve Niv
Souses positive
Sucks negative.

Loving lulu
Diva div
Your Eve Niv.

Eve Niv
With love leafage
Design her n’ weave.

Eve Niv
By grit n’ dash
Palpate the panache.

Phew n’ quip
Fie qui vive
I Eve Niv.

Me Eve Niv
Heady companion
Blatant bohemian.

View n’ accost
She is zombie
Harbor her freespree.

Blotto beaut
Heaving romance robe
Dipdouse in trove
Of Eve Niv.

Eve Niv
Osculate your dearie
Tipsy toppie toffee
Licklap gusto in
Sloshed smoochsmoothie.
.
Your hottie
Eve Niv
Don’t cleave
In dame Eve Niv
Venturously dare to live.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dwi Utami 18 August 2010

He miss your poetry was good for the verse to two that was the love not at random love, because i'did not know with the train of thought every poets, when wrote the poem was the contents from the head, about what he think and i'knew how your thoughts were wrote something simple but that made different only his words that was full of riddle made me turned the brain continued. Good of you 10/10

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Miroslava Odalovic 18 August 2010

It spreads my smyle, you wrap your I AM into the most tender language to appeal to others to start loving themselves IMMEDIATELY. Thanks

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David Beckham 10 August 2010

I love this poem. I personally believe, we have to love ourselves for others to love us. By then taking it one step forward means speaking out about how beautiful we as peoples are and thats where this poem makes it for me. Thanks for sharing

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Dwi Utami 09 August 2010

I liked the first verse from this poem to sell the woman and about global birds afterwards in coloured with very good composition chemistry. Well....+10

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Unwritten Soul 02 August 2010

you are good painter of life, your words never fail to draw reality onto a canvas of life... you not use a visible color but tangible feeling to your painting, that's make it valuable... most of your poem just like the 'Picasso drawing in form of poem'...10, enjoyable to read

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So Close 27 September 2012

really excellent lines...fantastic work hands off... »so close«

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Louis Cecile 27 October 2011

Excellent use of language and metaphors. The hypnotic use of Eve Niv keeps it on ones mind.

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Ebi Robert 15 July 2011

Your diction is hidden from my eyes. But I think you are a substance.

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Subbaraman N V 28 November 2010

A great poem in your own inimitable style! Some may feel it a little difficult to understand the real significance.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 November 2010

Again a great poem full of wisdom and depth. Another feather to your cap. Innovative and vivid. A thought provoking write.

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