Eyewitness Poem by nimal dunuhinga
Eyewitness
Face cloth in one hand
and with the other
eyeliner goes to her
magical eyes.
In front of a mirror
she saw her facet
and the faceless.
It's a confusion
and an eye-opener.
She has witnessed
my soul in the mirror.
This is a wonderful piece my friend. You capture a fleeting moment, within the narrative, and expand on it so beautifully.
In a few words you manage to say much. I love your work. Hope I can read all of it some time soon.
Nimal, it seems to me I've been out of the loop so long that I missed it when you changed your style. Growth is good and seems to have done you well. A+!
I'm rarely lost for words. Here, I can say merely that this is, to me, a perfect piece. t x
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 9:13:28 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Provocative title. Your poem speaks volumes in a very few words. Charming but also a bit vulnerable too. Sandra