...Faces............... (New Version) Poem by Eyan Desir

...Faces............... (New Version)

Rating: 4.8


Genetically brushed
Not by the cover
We know the tale
Beautifully crafted
Or hideously painted
It remains the same
Each holder their disguise
Is this heart friendly?
Clever, cunning or nice?
Dark and deceiving?
Open books, and read it's tale
When pages are turned
We unlock mysteries
Faces are just masks
Masking colors of a heart


Also try the poem (the heart)
June 11th 2009
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I gave it a 10! ! ! ! ! <33Payyton

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Karla Bardanza 16 June 2009

Nice poem.I really enjoyed it1

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Sally Plumb Plumb 17 June 2009

We'd better watch out what we write.

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Ken E Hall 17 June 2009

A thoughtful poem on an identity subject like judging a book by its cover, a very good subject for a poem...well done regards

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In Astrology our rising sign is the mask we show to others. How we look doesn't always say who we are. Especially women who paint their faces. 10 Karin Anderson

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Terrance Woolridge 25 June 2009

Good stuff man. Bruce lee once said Deception is all

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 25 June 2009

Some People try to please so hide their true face others put on a false face to get something in return - a treasure indeed when you find their true self - well written

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 24 June 2009

DEAR EYAN, GOOD DIAGNOSISE LOVE DOCTOR, BARRING ONE HITCH IN LINE SEVEN IT SHOULD BE PERHAPS'HOLDS HIS' INSTEAD OF 'HOLDER THEIR'. I CAN'T AGREE WITH MR KARIN ANDERSON'S GENERALISED COMMENT THAT'S APPLICABLE MORE TO LADIES WHO MASK THEIR FACES.GENTS AND THOSE INVOLVED IN POLITICS ARE RATHER MORE DANGEROUS. RAJKUMAR

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When pages are turned We unlock mysteries Faces are just masks Masking colors of a heart.... ya double speak and no respect for love......good write i represented trye picture in'Colour' findtime to read.

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Leslie Rodriguez 22 June 2009

this is wonderful poem! and incredibly true. you, are very talented. :) 10++

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