Fall Guy Poem by Sathya Narayana

Fall Guy

Rating: 4.6


People make fun at me...
my eyes glassy; nose stubby,
skin inky and body burly!

A fall guy I am
an ugly effigy; a zany!

I too boo at the Almighty...

'Hey! You went astray!
while shaping my clay! '

Monday, August 18, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: almighty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 29 August 2008

Here is a sister of that sort to console..don't worry..kindly know my feelings in my 'domestic shades-10'.thank you

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Nkululeko Mdudu 27 August 2008

we all have our faults, they make us who we are, we learn from others and what they say, then we discover ourselves

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C T Heart 27 August 2008

All creations are beautiful and unique...we just have to discover one's beauty either inner or outer, but inner personality is far more important. Great write...10 for you.

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Kris Smith 27 August 2008

The inner beauty of a person is far more important 10 Chris

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God's creations are all beautiful.I feel so. Beauty lies in deeds and not in shapes.Gods creations are not alike. The poet Sathynarayana writes good poems, but I can not. Why. Can I find fault with the Almighty?

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Sandra Martyres 30 April 2009

Fantastic piece..even the Almighty is not spared for erring while shaping your clay...A delightful read..10+++++

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Kranthi Pothineni 17 April 2009

I can sense the feel of this poem. Very well expressed.

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<font color=black>Nagourta 01 September 2008

The way in which you wrote this was VERY entertaining!

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Ellie Sutton 01 September 2008

I like the entertaining twist on saddening feelings, very enjoyable.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 29 August 2008

very enjoyable piece of work especially last two lines

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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