Falling Into Darkness Poem by Valerie Dohren
Falling Into Darkness
Falling into darkness,
Watch the fading light -
Moving with the shadows,
Drifting through the night.
All the world is silent,
Deep within, entwined -
Memories like phantoms,
Float inside my mind.
Love that once was cherished,
Lost in time and space –
Falling into darkness,
To this empty place.
A wonderful description of a haunting memory. Another great poem written by one of the best. Welcome back.
I despise such nights and hope yours prove brief and infrequent.
A nice poetic imagination, Dohren. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
A poignant write with an utter feeling of losing everything and anything on this earth. perfect emotional expression. Thanks for sharing.
I have to agree with everything RoseAnn said, except that at first reading I didn't get the 'death' part. I thought it could have meant divorce or separation of some other sort. In any case, a well-written poem. Thank you for sharing with us.
A very intense and eerily haunting poem of lost love through death. A perfect portrayal of the emotions hiding beneath the surface. Excellent poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A superb and fantastic poem, very recognizable experience put in very poetic verses. I look very much forward to your next poem, Val.
Thank you Aufie. Not doing much writing these days, but I appreciate your interest.