Bharati Nayak


Feel Me - Poem by Bharati Nayak

Is it too cold in your place?
Does cold wind bite your body?
Has there been snow fall in front of your house?
Touch the snow and
Feel me in the snow melting
Between your fingers.

Does your pet cat
Move around you
Seeking your warm touch?
Then stroke her head and
See, I am there.

You are walking in your lawn
Grasses are bending to touch your feet
You pick a blade of grass absentmindedly
Perhaps I am there
In that tiny grass blade.

You are walking in the open
A soft breeze blows across
Feel me in the breeze
Caught in your ruffled hair.

A shaft of golden light
Falls on your verandah
You draw a chair to the yellow light
And sit there
to read morning newspaper
Feel me dear
when a sunny warmth hugs you.

Bharati Nayak

Topic(s) of this poem: feelings, love, nature


Comments about Feel Me by Bharati Nayak

  • Parameswaran Nair Damodaran NairParameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair (3/3/2020 10:08:00 AM)

    The way of expressing love with a warm touch is beautiful." Feel me dear when a sunny warmth hugs you" - highly emotional (Report)Reply

    Bharati NayakBharati Nayak(3/3/2020 11:24:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair for visiting my poems and your kind appreciation.

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  • Geeta Radhakrishna MenonGeeta Radhakrishna Menon (5/18/2019 1:03:00 PM)

    Does your pet cat
    Move around you
    Seeking your warm touch?
    Then stroke her head and
    See, I am there.

    A poem, so warm, affectionate and full of emotion. Beautifully penned Bharati.....10
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  • Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak (5/18/2019 1:16:00 AM)

    What a beautiful way to say love and remember you, I'm sure you also!
    If so, check out this check list.
    Lovely. Full marks.
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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (5/13/2019 12:32:00 PM)

    I see you walk across the fields
    now here snow has melted
    come and dance for the folks please
    you r most welcome
    will earn dollars many
    only if you dance
    a dance too many

    ur dancing poetry iis soothing
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  • C Faustino (5/12/2019 12:58:00 AM)

    A happy and playful poem from you lifts up clouds from a gloomy world.10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Pamela SinicropePamela Sinicrope (4/14/2019 11:20:00 AM)

    A wonderful example of a 'you' poem that draws in your readers to the speaker. I think we are all connected with one another through nature, through our everyday lives. (Report)Reply

    Bharati NayakBharati Nayak(4/22/2019 12:20:00 PM)

    Thank you Pamela Sinicrope for your wonderful comment.It is so nice to see you on my page after a long time.

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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (4/14/2019 10:00:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem on sublime morn, nature and feeling of love that grips the heart when everything going simple and right.The flow is amazing.
    'You draw a chair to the yellow light
    And sit there
    to read morning newspaper
    Feel me dear
    when a sunny warmth hugs you.'...is so nice. Loved it.10++++
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    Bharati NayakBharati Nayak(4/22/2019 12:21:00 PM)

    Many thanks Anila Kumar Panda for your kind read and nice comment.

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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (4/6/2019 8:00:00 PM)

    when you are dancing in the morning
    dawn says come now feel me
    when you are dancing in the afternoon
    sun says it's her dancing zenith
    then in the evening again
    we feel the cool breeze
    and as sun sets
    you warm all

    your dancing now beats
    like heavenly drums
    you have a new Nritya begun
    dum duma dum
    and now snow comes
    warm up BN
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    Bharati NayakBharati Nayak(4/6/2019 10:26:00 PM)

    Your comment brought me a smile.Thank you for your nice comment.

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  • Abhipsa Panda (3/29/2019 12:06:00 AM)

    Nature has its own beauty.....so beautifully crafted Mam....thanks for sharing.... (Report)Reply

    Bharati NayakBharati Nayak(3/31/2019 8:57:00 AM)

    Thank you Abhipsa Panda for your appreciation.

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (3/24/2019 3:28:00 PM)

    This is really a beautiful poem on feeling, love and nature having touching expression with high insight. Great philosophical write.10 (Report)Reply

    Bharati NayakBharati Nayak(3/24/2019 7:08:00 PM)

    My humble thanks for your kind appreciation of the poem.

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (3/24/2019 11:16:00 AM)

    Feel me! ! ! !
    Between your fingers.

    Feelings,
    Love and art.

    🤗👫😄📚😍 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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    Bharati NayakBharati Nayak(3/24/2019 7:04:00 PM)

    Thank you Edward Kofi Louis for your kind comments.

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  • Prabir GayenPrabir Gayen (3/24/2019 10:57:00 AM)

    A shaft of golden light
    Falls on your varandah
    You draw a chair to the yellow light
    Andsitthere
    to readmorning newspaper
    Feel me dear
    when a sunny warmthhugsyou...
    ...... beautiful poem
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    Bharati NayakBharati Nayak(3/24/2019 11:30:00 AM)

    Thank you Prabir Gayen for reading and commenting on the poem just after I posted it.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 24, 2019

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 12, 2019


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