buried.............I am,
under the grave of expectation.
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waiting...........I am,
to butcher the ghost of obligation.
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unleashing......I am,
from the shackles of dogmatisation.
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progressing.....I am,
to the path of liberation.
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living.............I am,
now,
finally at peace.
piece with a feeling of tranquility and contentment of life....successfully catch the aloofness of the thing we called peace....beautiful write... unique style.....
nice phrasing of thoughts, compact yet very meaningful. We all wanted to live in peace and harmony along with the people that surround and influence us....Beautiful piece with different in grace...10/10
Now here is a poem of which any human body with a brain can relate to and especially me having studied the grieving process in the embalming room. The always persistant question where do we go from here after death and who knows maybe 'Finally at peace. very good poem.
Good imagery - and well phrased - in all a unique presentation of emotive thoughts.......
Vaibhav, Peace is one state that many seek and never find it's sad they can't see that when freed from the artificial constructs of man, then one is at peace. I guess people get too caught up in the ways of the world. Very introspective and contemplating. A real thinker for sure. Thanks for sharing.10+
finally you got peace, the only aim of human existence.extremely well written.poem, focused in the right direction! god bless you. ritty
wow.....this is a very calm and peaceful poem........ sincerely expressed. thank you very much.
There is no doubt about the quality of this poem. I loved the poem and the structure. This is a great poem. Bravo! GW62
Finally........ a simple wise poem has come out of muddly words.... Good job Vaibhav!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice piece well written....simple but reveals hidden meanings....sebastine....