Finally........At Peace Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

Finally........At Peace

Rating: 4.1


buried.............I am,
under the grave of expectation.
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waiting...........I am,
to butcher the ghost of obligation.
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unleashing......I am,
from the shackles of dogmatisation.
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progressing.....I am,
to the path of liberation.
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living.............I am,
now,
finally at peace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sebastine Humaemo 09 January 2009

nice piece well written....simple but reveals hidden meanings....sebastine....

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Miriam Maia Padua 07 January 2009

piece with a feeling of tranquility and contentment of life....successfully catch the aloofness of the thing we called peace....beautiful write... unique style.....

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C T Heart 06 January 2009

nice phrasing of thoughts, compact yet very meaningful. We all wanted to live in peace and harmony along with the people that surround and influence us....Beautiful piece with different in grace...10/10

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Paul Henry Dallaire 28 December 2008

Now here is a poem of which any human body with a brain can relate to and especially me having studied the grieving process in the embalming room. The always persistant question where do we go from here after death and who knows maybe 'Finally at peace. very good poem.

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Fay Slimm 26 December 2008

Good imagery - and well phrased - in all a unique presentation of emotive thoughts.......

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Gold Fish 16 October 2009

Vaibhav, Peace is one state that many seek and never find it's sad they can't see that when freed from the artificial constructs of man, then one is at peace. I guess people get too caught up in the ways of the world. Very introspective and contemplating. A real thinker for sure. Thanks for sharing.10+

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Ritty Patnaik 30 July 2009

finally you got peace, the only aim of human existence.extremely well written.poem, focused in the right direction! god bless you. ritty

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 18 March 2009

wow.....this is a very calm and peaceful poem........ sincerely expressed. thank you very much.

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Greenwolfe 1962 31 January 2009

There is no doubt about the quality of this poem. I loved the poem and the structure. This is a great poem. Bravo! GW62

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 January 2009

Finally........ a simple wise poem has come out of muddly words.... Good job Vaibhav!

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