Valsa George

Five Liner. Aborted Love - Poem by Valsa George

Brave handsome hero
Eyelash fluttering heroine
An abrupt love was born
A villain came in between
On the book of life, a tragedy scripted!

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Five Liner. Aborted Love by Valsa George

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/25/2016 12:55:00 PM)

    Date, Mate, Hate I With the muse of love and pain. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Amitava Sur (11/10/2015 7:14:00 AM)

    I am standing by Roop Rekha's side only excepting the song. Ha Ha... very nicely crafted. (Report) Reply

  • Roop Rekha Bhaskar (11/10/2015 12:58:00 AM)

    I saw an entire Bollywood movie in your 5 liner. (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (11/9/2015 10:50:00 PM)

    Good one. But why not on the book of life a thriller was scripted? The audience would love it that way. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/8/2015 8:33:00 AM)

    As if you wrote this poem after reading one or two Shakespeare's tragedies. Sometimes actual villain is fate as it happened in Romeo Juliet. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/8/2015 3:13:00 AM)

    Life is a drama, we don't know when comedy turns out to be a tragedy! Very nice. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/7/2015 4:38:00 AM)

    Brave handsome hero is in between grief and joy with this marvelous art work shared here. Touching home with emotion is very expressive and fantastic expression makes this dazzling.10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/7/2015 12:15:00 AM)

    sad, sad but in the end the hero always wins
    thanks Valsa-10
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  • Rajnish Manga (11/6/2015 11:43:00 PM)

    Very nice.... enjoyed. It looks like an open review of an old Hindi movie. Thank you, Valsa ji. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/6/2015 10:18:00 PM)

    This touched home with me. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rajendran Muthiah (11/6/2015 9:50:00 PM)

    O, when the villain enters the romantic comedy changes into a terrible tragedy. It is a pity that the love born is gone. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 6, 2015

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