Five Liner. Aborted Love Poem by Valsa George

Five Liner. Aborted Love

Rating: 5.0


Brave handsome hero
Eyelash fluttering heroine
An abrupt love was born
A villain came in between
On the book of life, a tragedy scripted!

Friday, November 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 06 November 2015

O, when the villain enters the romantic comedy changes into a terrible tragedy. It is a pity that the love born is gone.

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Kelly Kurt 06 November 2015

This touched home with me. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 06 November 2015

Very nice.... enjoyed. It looks like an open review of an old Hindi movie. Thank you, Valsa ji.

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Loke Kok Yee 07 November 2015

sad, sad but in the end the hero always wins thanks Valsa-10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2015

Brave handsome hero is in between grief and joy with this marvelous art work shared here. Touching home with emotion is very expressive and fantastic expression makes this dazzling.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 December 2019

A fabulous five liner on aborted love dear madam! Loved reading it...............................................................10/10

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 January 2016

Date, Mate, Hate I With the muse of love and pain. Thanks for sharing.

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Amitava Sur 10 November 2015

I am standing by Roop Rekha's side only excepting the song. Ha Ha... very nicely crafted.

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 10 November 2015

I saw an entire Bollywood movie in your 5 liner.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 09 November 2015

Good one. But why not on the book of life a thriller was scripted? The audience would love it that way.

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