Valsa George


Five Liner. An Exhortation - Poem by Valsa George

Rise, Oh friends, rise into action!
No time to be wasted in procrastination
Nor for the ripe moment, in anticipation
As the tiny seconds that go 'tick-tock'
Are irrecoverably dispelled from life’s clock

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about Five Liner. An Exhortation by Valsa George

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/30/2017 1:13:00 PM)


    This poem has contained a nice exhortation through the fine inking of a poetess. Valuable dictadictums. I fully appreciate this poem. Full vote. (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/4/2017 7:06:00 AM)


    In anticipation! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Bhargabi Dei Mahakul (9/19/2015 8:33:00 PM)


    Time is very precious and no time to be wasted. All should realize importance of time and with universal friendship all should rise in to right action. Clock reminds always to work hard and achieve life's goal. Very interesting and pleasant sharing....10 (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (9/9/2015 8:44:00 PM)


    A very valuable cautioning is spelled in this small poem what is irrecoverable. Very true.

    As I say in my way -
    I move in one direction only
    never, I retreat.
    Once I depart and go away-
    Will never come again.
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  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (9/9/2015 7:48:00 PM)


    A 'timely' exhortation that has eternal value. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/9/2015 2:12:00 PM)


    No time to lose. Just put things into action. Great advice. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/9/2015 1:30:00 PM)


    Motivational....................................Inspirational........................Outstanding poem. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (9/8/2015 5:07:00 AM)


    Yes every proceeding moment is death of the preceding moment. A nice poem.........................10 (Report) Reply

  • Roop Rekha Bhaskar (9/8/2015 3:56:00 AM)


    Agree one 100% Time and time does not wait for anyone. Procrastination begins early - sometimes in childhood. and then continues as a habit. wise five lines and very educational. I feel that such Liners should be written at the end of English text books. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 8, 2015



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