Valsa George

Five Liners.1 (The Finishing Touch) - Poem by Valsa George

With a stroke of the brush,
A dab of paint,
A portrait, I drew,
Blew into it the breath of life,
Lo! There it stays my Masterpiece

Comments about Five Liners.1 (The Finishing Touch) by Valsa George

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (5/16/2018 12:58:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem having haunting expression. Though it is in brief yet it explores vast meaning relating to philosophy. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/10/2017 1:07:00 PM)

    There it stays! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • (10/19/2014 12:50:00 PM)

    Amazing write in few words wonderfully......Valsa.......a masterpiece indeed (Report) Reply

  • (8/21/2012 3:09:00 AM)

    Stunning! With the stroke of a pen, a dab of ink, and a bit of inspiration, you've created something beautiful, and I love it. Good job. (Report) Reply

  • (8/19/2012 12:09:00 AM)

    brevity makes it a masterpiece. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (8/11/2012 4:33:00 AM)

    Marvellous! 'tis a masterpiece! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (8/10/2012 1:14:00 PM)

    Short, precise and full of detail.
    A fine work of art, your timeless masterpiece.
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  • Valerie Dohren (8/10/2012 10:13:00 AM)

    A masterpiece like this write - brilliant. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (8/8/2012 10:38:00 PM)

    An artist's words are revealed thru this superb poem.Soon your masterpiece will be before the world. (Report) Reply

  • (8/7/2012 7:17:00 PM)

    after the finishing touch, the painters normally do not touch the paintings again, even if they try to touch also, it looks very odd, but the poets have the option of editing. very touching poem! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 6, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 24, 2013

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