Five Liners No.2 (Molestation) Poem by Valsa George

What an imagination! You are a great poet!

ohfoooo amazing imagination...am completely blown off with these 5 lines.......so short yet so meaningful.....g8 write

A beautiful and tempestuous poem, makes one inclined to storm out of there.

A wonderful comparison of the sky to a girl where lighting ruptures her and thunder stamps her when she sheds tears of rain! GREAT IMAGERY!

Feel so much sadness in these words. Interesting write.

Stunning poem Valsa. Great images. I really love..... The Thunder stamps her with its thudding feet.

A beautiful imagination...................10

Great imagery with fantastic lines....Valsa......so beautifully crafted.......10/10

Poor Sky! i especially enjoyed the line: The Thunder stamps her with its thudding feet. remember me telling you about coincidences in my life the other day? well, TODAY i read a short story to my wife (from 1921 i believe) entitled Only Child, in which thunder and lightning was prominently mentioned. [ i haven't heard/seen thunder/lighting in a VERY LONG time.] i call that (this poem tied to the short story on; the SAME DAY) another spooky coincidence. would anybody agree? thanks for sharing. bri ;)

An excellent comparison! ! ! ! ! top markss