Flee To Sea Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Flee To Sea

Rating: 5.0


decorate with sweetened voice
and humble lovely imagery
all dripping in tangles blue
cast up by a nymph melody

by which they eagerly sailed to express
velvet waters are circled and sway
peacefully upon glowing reefs
merely a very special haven

one continuous shimmering breeds
along the curled rip of harmony
however strange it may feel
across this melodrama sea

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Juan Carlos Abeti)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 25 May 2009

deep and meaningfull poem.love it.posted 10 surya

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Naidz Ladia 23 May 2009

poems which goes to my fav means so great.this is included..naizz

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 22 May 2009

Dear Siddiqui, I liked this poem for its exquisite imagery expressed in short and sweet melodies which can match that of an ocean with that of a nymph. Your experince with the sea is picking up not only corals may be pearls as well. Thanks for asking my comments -A-10- from me -Rajkumar

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Subbaraman N V 22 May 2009

So much in so little! Absolutely great and congrats!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 May 2009

The poet must have spent most of his time in watching the sea side for writing the life story of the sea in all his tiny but graceful poems on seas.

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Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

You do seem to choose your words as if choosing a rare sea-plant. Very soothing.

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Eyan Desir 02 June 2009

Nice imgination u bring out there

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Omar Ibrahim 31 May 2009

wonderful piece...........keep it up

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Seema Chowdhury 30 May 2009

very nice and pleasing poem.

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Enchanting imagery and theme. Deep water too! 10 Karin Anderson

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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