Fog Dream Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Fog Dream

Rating: 5.0


I’m the worst enemy
I have no age bar
I can cut any body
I make lives miserable
And my name is ‘fear’

I’m the hardest foe
I can eat any brain
Can cut even gray links
I fill lives with sorrow
And my name is ‘anger’

I’m the bitter rival
I kill with a smile
But they like me lot
They dig their lives pit
And my name is ‘ego’

I’m the best of all
All these rest on me
I make them to breath
I make them to flee
And my name is ‘love’

Then I said, its wrong
Love is gift of life
It said, listen you fool
I exist in many forms
So trust, I’m the best

I awaked by its words

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 14 May 2009

oh what a wise lines.wonderfull poem.posted 10 for u surya

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

Really very nice poem. Last some lines are amazing: 'I exist in many forms': Wow splendid idea! 10 with pleasure.

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excellent..1000000000000000/10

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Joseph Poewhit 14 May 2009

' I make them to flee ' is very expressive and very deep in concept of love and it's overwhelming powers. - BRAVO

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rago rago 14 May 2009

beautiful and eloquent presentation........see my 10++

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‘Fearlessness is freedom’ Swami Vivekananda ‘Only thing we’ve to fear, fear itself’ F. Roosevelt [formerly president of US]. These are my comments Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Joseph Poewhit 22 May 2009

Trust is like the mortar between the bricks

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Catrina Heart 22 May 2009

well said in this poem.........Thanks to you! 10

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Louis Rams 17 May 2009

love is gift of life 'says it all'

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Kesav Easwaran 14 May 2009

Good awakening there...true words...well said...thanks

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