the rain pours lightly
a destiny is written
on silken gate
glowing
whose waterfalls
echo wonderfully
around fragile nature
so soft, so naive
teri yaad sath hai
banke tera jadi hai
rabne bana di jodi
tere naam kardi
blooming of morning jasmine
gorgeously uncovered
a companion of love
mirrored, melting
your calm shadow
weave a dream of longing
soul tenderly brightens
so divine, so humble
(dedicated to a poet friend at poemhunter, Glamorous Enigma)
another language! ! ! wonderful! ! ! ii think it is your language...am i right? ?
like a humble heart perfected by soul.....it's rendezvous of life.....happen in the avenue of this beginning of time....wow! i do love the way you express it...God bless.... a 10 +
Mellifluous words, literally poetical and exciting.10.
Many thanks for this Precious Dedication, I appreciate it/ your verses touched Glamorous Enigma, I loved your special words my Friend. Many Thanks/
The last stanza is magnificence...this 2 footnote is simply beautiful, my friend!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely flow to this, well penned dedication Lynda xx 10