Footnote 3 Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Footnote 3

Rating: 5.0


crescent moon hangs in nightmares
swords were charmed to defy
empty hearts turn to dust
vanished in disguise

you strikes the lyre
fluttering in desire
distant villages
are very green

Je prendrai les rayons du lune
Je dirai les mots des poemes
Je jouerai les musiques du paradis
Et du respect pour chaque matin

it is bound to be
a freedom feeling
all frontiers push back
you steadfast as thou heart

awake for a while in a slippery road
of mist upon the reddish valley
mixed emotion to care
a ponder of array

(dedicated to a poet friend at poemhunter, Obinna Eruchie)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 07 October 2009

nice expressed cogitation for a friend....

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 07 October 2009

The English and French portions are well-composed.

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Lynn Glover 07 October 2009

A good write for Obinna, Lynn

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Kranthi Pothineni 07 October 2009

The English portion is fine but the mid verse I couldn't get. It will be good if you translate the non English parts for others, to get the feel of your write.

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Obinna Eruchie 07 October 2009

Well, well, what a surprise for me, and is such a beautiful one, Ahmad. Thanks.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 05 November 2009

another nice symbolic footnote full of emotional meaning! Thanks For Sharing/

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 13 October 2009

Beautiful images to describe a friend. Well done my friend! a 10

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Anand Madhukar 12 October 2009

Excellent dedication yet again.

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Louis Rams 09 October 2009

very well written and with foresight of another poet.

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Marieta Maglas 09 October 2009

a wonderful dedication for our dear Obinna, a poem-comment, very well written.............

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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